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Happiness

When I started to write this rhyme
I thought that this very instant
Was my own, precious time
My presaged, peculiar moment
Maybe I was in my prime
Perhaps it was my promised minute
But the feeling was so sublime
That I would remember it forever

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  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:32:00 PM

    you write beautifully, in your own precious time, Vesna.. this is a lovely poem....

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Very emotive work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Sara..Your presence at my work was uplifting...

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:07:00 AM

    very interesting one. I have had moments like you describe. Interestingly, I DID forget them, but not the memory of having thought that I would remember them. Does that make sense??

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 6:06:00 AM

    It is a very good poem in rhyme Vesna. - I'm not so good at writing poems with rhyme in English - but, love to write poems in rhyme in Norwegian. - It is so difficult to find right words in another language. Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)