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  1. Date: 4/21/2014 9:01:00 PM
    Wow.. I can hear a narrator reading this words in the kind of sappy movie I try to deny I love, but I do love them and your poem has these essence that it's connecting to something much more about life than a nature scene.. Last two lines won't let me go Craig, congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/20/2014 4:59:00 AM
    Congrats Craig; lovely write; enjoyed the imagery. // paul

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 10:20:00 PM
    Nice- I like this one a lot. Great imagery, congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 9:30:00 AM
    this has a breathlessness about it......light, and dreamy !! Loved it !! Congrats to you, Craig!

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 12:37:00 AM
    Wonderful write and a great win Craig ,,, congrats on ur win !

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 12:05:00 AM
    Oh, this is so beautiful Craig. I am fav'ing it right now. Congratulations on your wonderful win!

  1. Date: 4/18/2014 11:36:00 PM
    It looks like I saw this one back in 2012 but I sure never remembered you wrote it. Big congrats to you, Craig. I really love the imagery. I hardly got any really beautiful poems in my contest this time, just lots of funny or simple style ones. The smart people will know how I value imagery.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:08:00 AM
    Amazing imagery. I remember one of my very first contests at Soup. I asked poets to use a list of my "20 most beautiful words" I think I asked for them to use ten. And gossamer for sure was on the list!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:14:00 PM
    enjoyed the wonder of curiosity trailing along your subtle, introspective lines, craig... charmed!.. huggs and SOUP MAIL!..:)

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:37:00 PM
    Very Nice !