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The Shell

An empty shell on the shore
No life within anymore
But why the shell
For someone to find
To see how clean
Its' walls were polished
Hear the echo of yourself
But heed not a word
You know better
'cause someone said
It wasn't really the sea...

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:19:00 AM

    Oh well that has shattered my illusion, love this craig, and the message here.... trying to write a sleepwalk, it is not going too good yet...

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 8:11:00 PM

    craig, i saw the revised one i did on my member's page.. could you check again?. thanks and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:32:00 PM

    Love the meaning flowing in your poem Craig. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. Hugs, Gail