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On Higher Levels

“It’s all about chemistry,” you said. “You know what happens when water and earth mixes . . . Becomes Mud . . .” I smiled inwardly and wondered if you really knew what a steamy mud bath feels like. Would the environment help us grow naked ladies and daffodils? I felt you stirring inside me . . . Oh, how I hoped you didn’t notice . . . too much. Did I conceal it well enough? Your words were making love to my mind on higher levels, over and over again . . . The push and pull, brushing against my soul, breathing life into Ancient Trees where dead people were wrapping their roots around me. Some nights I would undress before my naked window . . . I could feel your eyes lapping up every curve and line until your mind exploded in silence. When the feeling became too much, pouring feverish torrents over me, The cloak and daggers came on a sleepless night -- it was you and the red roses . . . You and the red roses. . . A hopeless romantic, An ancient, young man with fingers in the gashes you made inside yourself, trying to heal them with seeds from a Sacred Forest. Do they even know how deeply you feel the rhythm? All the beautiful people passing below the buttered sky where we make love in Cohen’s afterlife, day and night In the silence, the noise of raging mechanics pulled us ever closer, until all that was left for me was you, my Love. Oh, I didn’t have to do much. I didn’t have to say anything, really. I wrote my words in the stars each night knowing you would catch them if I couldn’t. 30/06/2012

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:24:00 PM

    I love this poem even more now. I've already mentioned this to you though. This is definitely one of my all-time favourite poems of yours. The last two stanzas(the entire poem is very strong)wrap-up the poem superbly! Absolutely enchanting imagery throughout.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:03:00 PM

    Christine, Speechless--perfectly wonderful from any angle, sorry I never caught this before!! Fav

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 2:54:00 PM

    ‡ This Beautiful Masterpiece Is What Keeps Novice's Amid Their Place In Re True Classical And Magical Poetry, Dear Sweet Beautiful Christine. Although None Should Compare For All Are Unique In Their Own Words ? Yet Few, Have The Gift I Have Joyfully Found Within This Soon To Become Beautiful Favourite By Another Beautiful Favourite. Stand In Awe Afore The Wall; Gaze For Days, And Never Grow Tired. Pure Beauty This Creation And Love Song. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡