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Goodbye, My Sweet Angel

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Goodbye, My Sweet Angel

Goodbye, My Sweet Angel

Tears trickle down her freckled cheeks
Eyes red and blurred
She gazed at me 
Trapped inside her father's speeding truck
I following , running screaming her name
She, screaming mine
Legs burning, stinging, tiring
Tears running down my face
Her dainty red nose, pressed against the glass
Weaker with every stride
Petite hands, pressed to the window
My pace slows, can not go any longer
Yelling her sweet name
Sobbing, to my knees
The truck, disappearing, gone
I had lost her
Goodbye, my sweet angel

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:59:00 AM
    Saying goodbye is undoubtedly a very painful experience. You've described the scene vividly. Nicely done Maddie!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:17:00 PM
    ‡ Tis What Happened Unto Norma Jean, Aka, Marilyn Monroe's Mother Afore She Was Ever Born Unto Another Father, Sweet Beautiful Girl. Always Stirring When Precious Heart's Suffer Sorrow. Love, Rachel ‡