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my dream

walk with me in my dreams in a satiny night sky with stars sparkling by the moon giddy with delight as we sleepwalk through the night in the silence of deep slumber our thoughts connect with each other a dream walk mesmerizing hearts with love's glow blazing this flame that is all embracing let's sleepwalk into each other's dreams get drenched in heavenly streams where our feet will take us, I don't know holding hands, never wanting to let go baby, with you, I need to go all the way, though I don't want this night to ever end let the daylight back to darkness bend as we look into each other's eyes we know we have found a love so true lets give our love its due in my dreams, come walk with me we don't need nobody no more to each other, let's hold on to walk the path strewn with golden dew to lonely dreamless nights, an adieu.

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 8:13:00 PM

    Between Yesha's Love rock and your Dream ,the trail of a rain drop.Ki kichhu bujhlen?

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 8:11:00 PM

    Get drenched in streams...I have just used this line in a poem:)Congrats Yasmin!

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:30:00 AM

    good to see this one high on the list because it's so deserving, my friend. Congrats to you and hope you are having a happy holiday season. (is it a holiday season where you are?)

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Yamin love this is specail , love it xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:38:00 PM

    Adorable. Many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Yasmin, congratulations in the Skat, contest. Take Care PD

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:26:00 PM

    Congratulations ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:14:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:41:00 PM

    I really enjoyed reading this nightly topic tonight, so full of, passion behind it..... All smiles thanks Yas

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:08:00 PM

    This is a lovely dream.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Lovely romantic and very sweet dreams of life penned Yas....loved the read and Congrats dear on your many wins!!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:17:00 AM

    This is a very sweet dream, Yassie. I love how it flows and to connect both dreams, a remarkable creativity :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:05:00 PM

    Yassie, who else but you could have such dreams they even sound happy which makes me content you've found some peace. Love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:17:00 AM

    Yasmin, I am ok. Joe still looking for work. there are jobs out there, but low paying or too much long distance,which he does not want anymore in trucking. I need to spend the rest of the day with him so I'm going thru as many replies as I can to people and then must stay off the rest of the day. Got library duty at 12 too, at my church. I will only have half an hour to get ready. haha. ARe you having a good weekend? Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 11:48:00 AM

    Another great poem from you Yasmin!Beautifully penned.Lovely read.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:27:00 PM

    Hey, are you sure you do not write lyrics for a living? This is marvelous. I have not even made the time to HEAR this song, but I bet you captured its essence!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:53:00 PM

    VERY CUTE ONE I ENJOYED IT

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 6:15:00 PM

    lovely way to put sleepwalk melody into a lyrical poetry, mareeey.. i'm mesmerized!!..:) priya hugs to you!..:)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:00:00 PM

    This is a truly beautiful and sentimental write! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful and delightful poem this evening! What a powerful piece my friend, I love it, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:26:00 PM

    This is very beautiful,Yasmin..straight into my fav poems dear friend:) Have a peaceful and blessed weekend,Yas!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:04:00 PM

    This is so lovely yasmin, enjoyed...

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Beautiful dream!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:01:00 PM

    You have described a really gorgeous dream Yasmin - Follow your dreams in life. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:42:00 PM

    This is a dreamy sleepwalk... :-) LOve it. Wishing you a pleasant weekend, Yas, Love, Su