Sharks Are On The Prowl by Arild Andresen Ertsland

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2013 9:06:00 PM

Hi Arlid , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

elizabeth wesley

Date: 11/13/2012 3:10:00 PM

Romantic Arild on the prowl with words to incite danger! Quite a lot of excitement in this one, a great poem to read and enjoy!

jack horne

Date: 11/12/2012 2:49:00 PM

love this clever write, my friend

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 11/6/2012 12:24:00 AM

A cute and inspiring poem, full of depth

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/5/2012 11:33:00 PM

Awesome and chilling verse. Way to be inspired! Always, Laura

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/5/2012 1:07:00 PM

love and sharks in some very hot waters. ha ha Cute poem that had me smiling. love phyl

Anne Currin

Date: 11/4/2012 8:03:00 PM

I love this! The adventurous writing takes me for a ride. Watch out for sharks! Lol. Great write! :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/4/2012 7:09:00 AM

A very sweet and adventurous poem, Arild. enjoyed this a lot. :)

daver austin

Date: 10/31/2012 12:21:00 PM

Yes! The dangers, excitement of love making. Love, daver

nette onclaud

Date: 10/28/2012 11:16:00 PM

arild, i want anoother gem.. go!.. happy monday with huggs!..:)

Owen Yeates

Date: 10/24/2012 11:26:00 AM

Hi Arild or should I call you Mr Douglas on that beach I like this great, all the best Owen

nette onclaud

Date: 10/24/2012 9:17:00 AM

hello, sharkie.. needed this to boost me; rains again, awhhh!.. keep that smile!..;) huggs

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/24/2012 10:33:00 AM

thank you,sweetie!:-) keep smiling in the rain my dear friend:-)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/23/2012 3:25:00 PM

Wow Arild, talking about living on the edge!! Romantic, erotic, and done with pure class as only you can do. Such reality and images that stretch the imagination. Glad you liked another chapter of me. Hope you are well across that big puddle that separates us poets. Michael

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/24/2012 10:35:00 AM

doing fine,brother! up and runnin`about again:)

CYNDI MACMILLAN

Date: 10/22/2012 8:56:00 PM

:) Okay that is hot! Really enjoyed this write. I never make suggestions... except to really brilliant writes such as yours... it works just as it is, exactly as it is, but you may wish to consider in the second to last line... RIDE THE waves sweetie... it may add to the erotic elements and it makes you wonder... who is the shark? ;-) Thanks for all you bring to soup. You are such a warm person, always kind, always helpful. Cheers and hugs, Cyndi

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/23/2012 10:46:00 AM

thanks for the input,Cyndi;) but the idea came after I saw a documentary about how too much "splashing" in the water could trigger a shark to attack..so that`s why I chose `make no waves`..:-) hugs back at ya`Cyndi! and thank you so much for your kind and uplifting words:)

Neha Godambe

Date: 10/22/2012 2:51:00 AM

Ahem! I think these sharks prowling around are adding to the charm of this romantic love making scene! Kudos Arlid!

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/22/2012 12:04:00 PM

thank you dear Neha! and thank you for your very nice comment too:) Kudos my friend!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 1:30:00 PM

Arlid, what are sharks doing prowling around this sweet and romantic image (sexy).... hum hum!! Do not worry about it, love making in the water... I'm sure the only one seeing are the fishes... lucky you jaws is only a movie, and the moon only speaks to he or she that is listening. I'm watching the "Friday the 13 movies" with Jason.. lol..he's killing all them love makers..campers... LOL... I'm looking out for you and this magical silhouette ... he he he..xox~pd

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/21/2012 1:36:00 PM

thanks dear friend:) lol,yes the fishes..poor creatures, they can`t even close their eyes..lmao:-)xox~Arild

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/21/2012 12:01:00 PM

This is an "ahhhhhh" poem...!!! Love the moon peeping in !! I'm sure she's seen a lot over the years...and holds her secrets well...Enjoyed !!

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/21/2012 12:15:00 PM

thanks for your lovely comment,Debra!..lol,yes she better keep her secrets:-)

nette onclaud

Date: 10/21/2012 3:30:00 AM

having shark's fin for this beautiful sunday, arild?.. greetings with hugggs!..:)

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/21/2012 10:53:00 AM

yes! shark fins it is,dear nette:) hugs!!:-)

Leonora Galinta

Date: 10/20/2012 5:12:00 AM

Hello, Arild! Nice to see you again my dear friend! I enjoy reading your awesome poem today. Soooo romantic! I love it; but, what is that moon peeking on you? Is it a good chaperone?LOL Thank you so much for sharing and for stopping by. Have a blessed and grace-filled time/day always! love/hugs:) Leonora

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/20/2012 11:44:00 AM

:-) yay! we`ve turned you into a full addicted,nora? rehab is not allowed..lmao

Leonora Galinta Date: 10/20/2012 5:17:00 AM

thank you so much my dear friend. i am always missing you all here!

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/20/2012 5:15:00 AM

moon is too curious..lol:-) have a great weekend too dear leonora!hugs and love~arild

yasmin khan

Date: 10/20/2012 1:18:00 AM

aw Arild, we don't want anything happening to the soup's most loved poet, so buddy take care, you almost gave me a scare but I loved this write, it gave me great delight but be careful, will you, take care and don't ever take any risks...have yourself a fun weekend and if you are on a holiday again I will die of jealousy..

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/20/2012 5:10:00 AM

am good..I survived!:-) no,not on vacation yet.have to wait until late december or so.enjoy your weekend dear friend:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2012 11:18:00 PM

hey, I see you got that curious moon peeking in on you too!! VERY creative and fun to read, my friend.

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/20/2012 5:08:00 AM

yeah..! what is it about that moon? always peeking at us:-)

nette onclaud

Date: 10/19/2012 6:33:00 PM

whoo, you are simmering with sweet heat, arild.. has the sun risen over there.. a beautiful piece with sensual tones; never mind if the sharks are around...yes!..:) huggs

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/20/2012 5:07:00 AM

..they`re everywhere!!:-) thanks for your always sweet comments sweet friend!

Gwendolen R.

Date: 10/19/2012 5:27:00 PM

Love mixed with suspense!! U do live life on the edge, Arild!! Now I gotta check if Mrs. Arild commented below....HEY!! At least no one got bitten! Fun write! :) gwendolen

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/20/2012 5:04:00 AM

thank you dear friend!:-) enjoy your weekend with the newborn family member! hugs~Arild

Ruben O.

Date: 10/19/2012 3:49:00 PM

Very interesting. I like how you present those sharks on the prowl... Im thinking.... Anne Lise: you're supposed to be the last one in noticing it. : ) Is it for Delilah's Contest? ; ) Great write, Arild! Ruben.

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/20/2012 5:03:00 AM

thanks for your nice comment,Ruben:) haha..she caught me!! thanks for giving a good laugh:-)

harry horsman

Date: 10/19/2012 3:09:00 PM

have these sharks got two legs Arild, haha.. love the poem, takes one away from every day living, reminds me of leaving the paradise of New Zealand, to come home to the uk...

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/19/2012 3:23:00 PM

thanks for stopping by harry! saw a documentary the other day about the waters around australia..scary stuff with all them sharks:)

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2012 1:50:00 PM

Oh, yes .... who is she? .... lol.....me :)

Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/19/2012 2:19:00 PM

You two are too funny. I needed that laugh today. Love you both, Gail

Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 10/19/2012 1:55:00 PM

not telling...;-)

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