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So Slow

Lazy rippling streams go by
As we in the shade do lie
Life so peaceful and so slow
When there is nowhere to go

Life is hectic and so fast
Till we slow it down at last
Precious seconds so enjoyed
Best this way our time employed

So let’s enjoy this peace and quiet
Come one and all let’s try it
Leave our shackled busy life
Let the slow life ease up all our strife

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  1. Date: 10/21/2012 5:41:00 AM

    wonderful advice, Owen and an awesome poem...

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:22:00 PM

    Soooo Tue Owen...we really forget about the wonderful life we can gain from enjoying some down time! = Life/Work Balance - hugs - Shaz

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:10:00 PM

    Good poem Owen. A time comes when we have to slow down some, so that we can enjoy life more. Thanks for sharing this with us and Thanks for your comment on my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:01:00 AM

    Very nice and soothing, the words chosen truly give the reader the atmosphere of ease (and peace). Enjoyed!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:33:00 AM

    "Green Onions" and your poem have made my morning.