Inspired by my students who fidgeted a lot and with quite malicious mind staying with woman, LOL
Below is the poem entitled The Lad And His Candy which was written by poet
Galinta. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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Here comes a good lad
with his gentle and pure heart
who loves to eat a cotton candy
with no color but only pure white.
When he attempted to take a bite
His candy suddenly flew up into the sky
Amazingly, it transformed into cumulus clouds
The lad suddenly became an angel
So he flew and followed it up so high.
The angel and clouds are so white
They’re both trying to make the world so bright
So with our hearts and minds
Purity and cleanliness must reign in our lives.
Oct. 15,2012. 9:30 PM
((This is not for the contest)). I wrote this short poem at the hotel during the camp for the 3 kids/boys who stayed with me in my room and fidgeted a lot . It had somehow calmed them down especially the most restless one, Term. I will change the title later because it's a short story.