Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership
Quote of the Day

Quote Left"A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world."Quote Right

by Joseph Addison

  |  Comment

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

The venom of loneliness

Asif Andalib Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The venom of loneliness which was written by poet Asif Andalib. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Asif Andalib

Best Asif Andalib Poems

+ Fav Poet

The venom of loneliness

Loneliness is biting me like a cobra
Its venom is killing me bit by bit
Now I have become something like an animal
I don’t bathe, wash my face and brush my teeth
Regularly

It seems without you I will die like a street dog
I don’t comb my hair, Put on clean clothes, 
Go out for a walk and do any job
Regularly

I can’t concentrate on anything
I no more like to write, dance and sing
I spend sleepless nights like the rats and bats
I fall asleep in the morning like night guards
I startle hearing ring of my phone thinking it’s from you
I keep on wondering why it’s happening to me more and more

I am like a flower in a garden and you are like a butterfly
I wait for you all day long day after day
My beautiful petals fall one-by-one
My sweet smell is carried away by rain and wind
But you do not come, my friend

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:46:00 PM
    Good poem.