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Grey

All the world fades to grey
all the world goes away 

I feel the hurt of the earth 
I know I return to dirt 

in the air, I can see a grey
and days should never feel this way

there is still hope to see the color of tomorrow
although today is revealing a lot of sorrow

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  1. Date: 11/14/2012 1:12:00 PM

    We are but ashes in the end, many hearts now mend. Cheers! Dark_Mistress

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 11:49:00 AM

    WICKED WRITE REMINDS ME OF MY NEW AGE POEM THANKS FOR COMMENT MATE DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Clay, i will settle with this grey feeling, after all dirt comes and goes... enjoyed your couplets... pd

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:43:00 AM

    DYNAMIC WORDS CLAY .. LUV ..I FEEL THE HURT OF THE EARTH .. I KNOW I RETURN TO DIRT .. COMPELLING AND EMPHATIC POEM LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 7:38:00 PM

    Clay this poem is astounding. I love the way you put the color grey in meaning like this and thank you for commenting on my poem Winter's Blanket. Gail