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The Curious Moon

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The Curious Moon

A young man leads his girlfriend to a tree
one sultry summer eve as night is looming.
the branches of the old oak form a canopy
under which he leans in for a kiss, assuming
his new love also feels their romance blooming.

The pretty girl is innocent and shy,
but from the boy’s sweet kiss she feels that he
might be her one true love; more kisses make a sigh
escape her lips. Her inhibitions flee,
and touching him arouses her curiosity.

Aglow, they feel a passion all-consuming,
undressing one another as fingers fly.
The curious moon, with incandescence blooming,
peeks down from a star-bedazzled sky.
Young love with moon above shall never die.


Written 10/17/12 for Francine Robert's
Romance me with English Quintains Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:23:00 AM

    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 7:22:00 PM

    How romantic, congrats Andrea on your super duper win love vie

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:17:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:00:00 PM

    magical write andie! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Awesome write! The imagery is really great, and the title is perfect! Congrats :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:43:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Andrea

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:27:00 AM

    Beautiful Write Andrea. Warm congrats for the win.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:15:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your first place win Andy , this is great xx

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:53:00 AM

    Heartfelt and innocent...charming write! great word choice...For your win.,.Goom bei (cheers in Anjiwa Chinese--dialect spoken near Shanghai)

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:10:00 PM

    magnificent as usual Andrea, congrats on your first place win

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:36:00 PM

    O yes; a true romance! A must-be-winner, dear Andrea. A very fluid flow of rhymes which suit the romantic atmosphere in this classic writing form. Beautiful! Best wishes!:) Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 5:16:00 PM

    "Isn't it Romantic." Your wonderful piece reminds me of this famous tune from the 30s. ...? Maybe the 40s. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 7:48:00 PM

    You handle the subject matter exquisitely Andrea; it starts out with such innocence and the build up is perfect. Enjoyed reading this gem from beginning to end. Love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:56:00 PM

    An ageless sence of youthful glow. Emanates from your pens flow. With spirit fresh as newborn love. Your poetry's sent from God above.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 1:04:00 PM

    Hey that old oak tree is making its appearance again Andrea.." If i get to your part of the world, I'll just have to pen something about it..!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 9:19:00 AM

    A lovely romance. Tried to soup mail a response to you, but keep getting error messages. Let me know if you do get my reply.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 6:46:00 AM

    awww, beautiful write, Andrea. I'm trying hard to catch up but don't have much time - will have to catch the bus to the hospital soon

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:54:00 AM

    OH ANDREA THANKXX SO MUCH FOR MY WIN IN CLERIHEW .. HOPE MY MUSTACHE MADE U SMILE A LOT .. AM SO HONORED TO BE RECOGNIZED WITH A LIST OF PREMIER POETS .. ALSO THANKXX TO HELPING JUDGE .. SO HAPPY LUV.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 11:42:00 PM

    thanks for the clerihew contest though i got flustered.. had to change it when you posted something on ryming.. so confused!.. soupy for you..

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 5:11:00 AM

    I wrote a clerihew for my liberal friends...lololol...just for fun of course...glad u liked Pikachu...I had to endure an hour long lecture on him by Mika before I knew enough about him to write...it was pure torture! Ha ha...glad u enjoyed it! Peeka peeka Pika-CHU!!! gwendolen :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:00:00 PM

    Beautiful..you romantic you,Andrea:) Nothing beats a romance under the moonlight,eh? Have a splendid weekend dear friend!Hugs~Arild

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:03:00 AM

    A wonderful write-- romance under the bright moonlight. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:51:00 AM

    Nice job with this poem. It made me remember my first love and the love i have now and the last marriage i will ever have. thank you so much. You have a good day!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:37:00 AM

    Hi Andrea relly like this my friend, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:36:00 AM

    not only the moon but i am curious too, wow it is getting hot here in my room, must be the photo i saw of you a while back on the net, that and my imagination when reading this awesome poem of yours... guess i just love this lady,

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 5:16:00 AM

    Lovely poem you have written here! How are you doing! Nice reading your newest post today.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:49:00 AM

    ROMANCE AND BEYOND ANDREA AS THE MAGICAL MOON HOVERS .. LOVELY LINES WITH INTIMATE IMAGERY WILL GARNISH U A TOP NOTCH WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 9:47:00 PM

    Wow beautifully written and enchantingly amusing. It put a warm smile on my face. Thanks for the lovely poem :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 9:30:00 PM

    U make this form look so darn easy!! Spectacular view of these sweet lovers from the moon's perspective! Great work! SOUP MAIL! :)

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