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Sunshine in her Smile



Sunshine in her smile like soft afternoon sun rays forming a rainbow in my grey and cloudy sky after a heavy downpour. Give me more sunshine O faraway sunlight girl, this old fragile heart now longs for more sunny days, wake me up from my slumber! © kash poet ===========000=========== Placement:1st; (October 2012) Contest:Tanka Crazy--Sunshine Sponsor: Leonora Galinta ===========000============

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:08:00 PM

    Kash, you are gifted! Wow! This just warms my heart. :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:43:00 PM

    This is spectacular, Kashi! The magnetic pull of her sunshine will definately wake u up! Convincing and powerful narrative! :) ps...I read your son's latest posting the other day...he has such maturity in his work...u must be proud! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:33:00 PM

    Kash..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:28:00 PM

    Beautiful piece,Wonderful write,Kash..Nice going,friend...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...Keep flying....

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:10:00 PM

    kashi!... you nailed it.. so fab!.. wooohoo.. congrats with huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:01:00 PM

    Yes, a most deserved first place win, my friend. Congrats to you!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 11:23:00 AM

    CONGRATS KASH ON A PHENOMENAL WRITE AND OUTSTANDING WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 10:00:00 AM

    Big congratulations on you win Kash xx

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:12:00 AM

    I hope your Sunny gal does as you ask! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 7:13:00 AM

    congrats on your great win Kash...

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Kas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:34:00 AM

    Congratulations Kash for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:47:00 PM

    awesome tankas Kash, good luck...

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:15:00 AM

    Good luck for the contest, Kash. you got candy pen I think, all of the words that flow are tempting! :)

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:01:00 PM

    Cheer up, my friend and good luck for the contest with such a poignant song!:) Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:13:00 PM

    hi, Kash, I came here to maybe judge my contest, but it is going to be so difficult!!! See ya when I see ya!!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 6:12:00 PM

    grrreat; you've risen from your slumber, kashi.. i got so busy.... hody, bud!.. drop by!.. fascinating write!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 12:01:00 PM

    Dearest Kash, This is just beautiful. Your love, caring and passion shows. Sincerest regards, Lucinda Cayton

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 12:00:00 PM

    ILTSM! kash, thank you so much for stopping by and reading my poem. Good luck always! love, leonora

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:28:00 AM

    Kash, this is just great, wonderful image, I love it...David

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:20:00 AM

    Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Hi Kash - The melancholy is stunning. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:36:00 AM

    A GORGEOUS CANVAS OF ROMANTIC WORDS THAT GLOW KASH .. U R SO MASTERFUL AT CHARMING THE EYES OF THE READER LUV .. BEST WISHES .. A SUNNY DELIGHT ..

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:36:00 PM

    very sweet, with lovely imagery. i love the line "o faraway sunlight girl" - nice!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Beautiful poetry from your " fragile old heart"..Love this one and will send it to my favs. BG

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:09:00 PM

    Smiles must be a theme today. Wonderful Tanka. Uplifting

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 3:14:00 PM

    Wow, what a delightfully sunny write my friend! I really enjoyed this pleasantly perfectly presented piece Kashi! You are brilliant in creating this wondrous poem, incredible piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 3:14:00 PM

    ok, got it, Kash. I'm outta here now. Gonna be a little late getting home. haha. But I got a lot done today!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:54:00 PM

    this is beautiful, KAsh. But you certainly do not have an old fragile heart. You are still young, my sweet friend!!!