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Her Recipe

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Her Recipe

Melting Chocolate with cinnamon,
Dropping chili on them,
Some lemon drops,
Mixed with orange juice,
All together,
So hot ,
Intensely smelt,
In a deep pot,
Held with both hands,
Some drops on the lips,
Felt by a confused tongue,
Then flowing inside,
With a bitter sweet pleasure...
That’s what she did
When she found that
She is more complicated
Than she ever thought!

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:53:00 AM
    women are unique, they have mood and passion to sustain; not to mention our conscience and academic intelligence. *sigh* see how complicated we are ;) enjoyed the read so much.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 4:29:00 PM
    This melting pot is a forget me not. It's like a pot of life, so many are sought. If it's to be so complicated, it needs to be read. In turn the outcome, make sure the words are wholly said. Nice one Omneya, and many thanks for reading my humble words :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:28:00 PM
    Excellent piece that shows the levels of a person. Love your take on it. Just popped in to read and glance at that lovely smile. Hugs :•) Michael

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 10/28/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Micheal, Thanks for stopping by and reading the poem, so glad a talented poet like you enjoys reading my poem... ;) have an amazing week! Omneya
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 3:14:00 PM
    I now have a taste for your style of Poetry, keep them coming. I have always been partial to a little lemon, very cleansing. good job and thanks for stopping by and reading some of my work.

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 10/28/2012 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Richard, thanks for stopping by too, So glad you like the poem and share the lemony flavor I added to it ;) Have a good day! Omneya
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:30:00 PM
    wonderful write Omneya...enjoyed....thanks for stopping by....love ...Joseph

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 10/26/2012 6:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked it Joseph! Thanks for stopping by too! enjoy your week end, Omneya
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:08:00 AM
    Tastes well ? ? ? it was enjoyable to read it Omneya- a poem that I liked very much - thank you for sharing it with me. Have a nice day. - / / oxox love from Anne-Lise :)

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 10/26/2012 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Anne, so glad you follow my writings in here! so happy you like this poem, its very close to my heart! have a great week end! <3
  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:23:00 PM
    this piece makes me think of a sweet symphony..keep penning dear poetess so that I could taste more sweetness from you.. regards jett

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 10/26/2012 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Jett, Thanks dear for your comment and for reading the poem! so happy u liked it you seem to be a fan of free verse like me :) so we so much relate!
  1. Date: 10/22/2012 2:44:00 AM
    WHoa! Chocolate and chili? WHyyyy? You have highly succeeded in bring out the complexity of this character. I love how you've used edible food to illustrate abtract attributes - clever. Very nicely done Omneya!

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 10/26/2012 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    As usual Vicky your comments are just so connected so what i were thinking while writing! you just understand what I feel and mean so easily! you are my soul poetess!! Thanks alot dear <3
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:10:00 PM
    :) Indeed, a complicated brew. Nicely done. Welcome to the Soup.

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 10/18/2012 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Tanya! :) so glad you like the poem, Have a great week end, Omneya