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  1. Date: 4/20/2014 8:11:00 AM
    Hahaha!!! Love it :)

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 8:19:00 PM
    beautiful tanka Rubin, we all do this I guess, and yet, sometimes it sound truly beautiful, lovely insight

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 10:09:00 AM
    I like this one, thanks.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:45:00 AM
    Great tanka here Ruben!Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 7:12:00 AM
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment on my poetry Ruben. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 9:16:00 AM
    the songs of a poetic voice, compose by the song of the wild song birds interesting write..

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:39:00 PM
    tried to send you an answer don't know if it got through, I finally got your message [the jist of it was i still don't understand] let me know if you got the whole message I got error 500 when i sent it. XXX Light & Love

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 10/19/2012 4:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    maybe it will come eventually yours did! no matter hon..I guess I'm just dense
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 6:01:00 PM
    hmmmm [man..I have no idea?] hmmmm Light & Love

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 10/18/2012 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    it wil be my pleasure! LOL!
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 10/18/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yike working BRIDGE okies soupie mail Debbie-Do a tanka lesson..please with sugar?
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:17:00 PM
    awesome, you put a working "bridge" in the middle of your tanka!!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:14:00 PM
    innovative tanka, ruben... uncage that creative soul..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:27:00 AM
    I love your Tanka, Ruben. - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 10:52:00 AM
    I know why the caged bird sings this is great My read between the lines skills are gettin better, was looking at some of your other pieces now I know why your so popular I like your work.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 10:08:00 AM
    Ruben, I am sincerely glad that you have found your tanka muse -- I think tanka and you were meant for each other :D

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 10:06:00 AM
    13 syllables! 13~!! I've gone down to 20 syllables before :D~ I like Leo's comment below(extract some of his words and pretend they are now up here). Great ta-ta-ta-tanka here, Ruben. I am only posting my 'medium-strength' tanka, leaving the best for later. Hmmmm, another strong pivot, yet again. 13! 13~!!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 9:26:00 AM
    A complex presentation, indeed...we all determine the ultimate strength of the cages that contain us and whether we are wild or tamed...and, many other interpretive and interesting possibilities are suggested by your very worthy piece...good work.

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 10/18/2012 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    : )