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  1. Date: 7/22/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Bumpy is the cyberspace but yet you never want it to be paved smooth. I like that you let loose for this short and sweet.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 3:55:00 AM

    A fun read. Again, a great write.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 11:13:00 AM

    If this is what you can write without "that wild tobaccy" let's see you on it. Try one toke for me. Smiles.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:07:00 PM

    lol..thanks God you are not smoking the wacky tobaccy.... and your poetry is always the best...no matter the form... no go night night... and write me a poem... he he he...pd

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 6:01:00 AM

    Know the feeling Carol I've lost a few Like that; best thing to do is keep right On there though.."

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:15:00 AM

    Chuckling over this reflection on the techno world! One never quite trusts the computer, no? I like the last couplet - sometimes I think the glitches are saying: "take a break". Enjoyed, John

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:34:00 AM

    nice write Carol....that happened to me too....hugs

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 8:33:00 PM

    I hate when things disappear into the void. I have to remember to back up.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:37:00 PM

    I remember after about 1990, i was using a computer xt type, speed 1o megahertz, screen used to burn me eyes, so i used dark glasses, i had just put some story on the hard drive and it died, leaving me stranded with no back up of a few hours of work...always make a back up hey....Don ps..S C B love the flow an rhyme of this poem..."Bumpy Cyber Space" Carol Brown Don

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:18:00 PM

    I like this one, Carol. You write beautifully. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem Love and for welcoming me to poetrysoup. - Farida

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:15:00 AM

    A little bumpy indeed, lovely couplets with a touch of humor. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you, Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:19:00 AM

    It's happened to me many a time Carol. I like it very much. Hazel :-)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Related nicely making a concrete bridge between the two. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:19:00 AM

    if this is a subsitute for the one you lost, i like it very much

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:51:00 AM

    Great write, Carol. Makes me wonder what Homer would have done. Alas, epic Troy's story may have gone "unsung" in today's technical world. All best in light, peace and love, Orma Faye

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:50:00 AM

    playful style, easy feelings ironic, humorous. Focusing on modern versions with indirect invitation to meditation on the future.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 5:59:00 PM

    LOL..but I know it's not funny..frustraing as heck! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:27:00 PM

    Ha, ha, this is good humor.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:19:00 PM

    hahaha, you must be reading from the new poems- ALL list. Never do that one. I always look only at New Poems by Poet! Love your funny poem, Carol.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:42:00 PM

    You made me laugh! : D ... So funny, dear Carol! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Yes! This is so very true my friend! We've all been there before, written a masterpiece just to have it blown away through cyberspace! I always save it on my hard drive first through Microsoft Word, I have to or I would certainly lose it through cyberspace without a trace too. You are quite good at describing a lost work and needing a rest! Very awesome piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:38:00 PM

    awwwwh, we all getting a burn-out, carol.. sweeet of you to post!..:) huggs and stay well!..come home soon, though:)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:37:00 AM

    Love the 'tobaccy' line. This is the way to beat those gremlins lurking in cyberworld!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:08:00 AM

    ‡ Thank You, Sweet Beautiful Carol, For Your Wonderful Lovely Visit; Yesss. I Used To Copy My Post Until One I Decided Or Realized, Everything Is Dust In The Wind ˜ Now I View It As A Scented Candle; Let Its Aroma Have Its Moment And May It Leave But A Trace Of A Sweet Sweet Smell. And Yesss Again, Beautiful Lady, Cyberspace Can Be The Place, Where Waves Wash The Shores Away, Unto Albeit, The Brighter Days. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 7:53:00 AM

    I loved these lines, Carol, "This is beginning to be so wacky, No I ain't smoking that wild tobaccy" so cute. Enjoyed. hugs, catie ps - I am having tech problems too....sigh...

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 7:40:00 AM

    Got a chuckle..Yes, some strange things have been happening on here of late..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in a contest..Sara