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Crossing The Finish Line

Crossing The Finish Line * Some people want to what it takes to get there * * * * And many enter the real race of life * * * * And trying to make it to the finish line * * * * Well many enter but never make it there * * * * Win or lose as long as they know they have tried * Erich J. Goller Copyright 4.28.2012

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  1. Date: 10/27/2012 10:28:00 AM

    you sure are good at lanterne poetry, Erich. Very nice.

    Goller Avatar Erich Goller Date: 10/27/2012 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Andrea,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 3:39:00 AM

    Great thought process which has a natural flow, enticing me to the end: "Win or lose..." Love your conclusion :-) Su

    Goller Avatar Erich Goller Date: 10/18/2012 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Suzette, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Hugs!Erich
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 3:13:00 AM

    A unique poem with a clear voice. - Excellent written Erich - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Goller Avatar Erich Goller Date: 10/18/2012 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Anne Lise,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, Hugs!Erich
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:12:00 AM

    Excellent lanterne sequence, Erich! Wisdom! Ruben.

    Goller Avatar Erich Goller Date: 10/18/2012 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Ruben,Erich
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 9:08:00 PM

    Erich, you have a unique way with taking me to the end of your poem... like the finish line,,, i love the creativeness your pen owns... enjoyed...pd

    Goller Avatar Erich Goller Date: 10/17/2012 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Destroyer, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem Hugs!Erich