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The Grief Stricken Song

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The Grief Stricken Song

I feel abused.
Not physically or mentally,
But internally.
Everything within has been barricaded
by hurt and anger.
Pain takes over all of my organs riding it like a
ranting bull,
Awaiting the finish line.
Time moves faster and I still feel empty.
I still feel the pain.
It has dissipated a bit but,
No matter what, it's still there.
What's left of my tired soul peaks
through,
Any open holes or gaps that may reveal itself.
I just can't seem to shake off this agony and in
the process,
I die slowly.
Internally rather than physically
Because I have been that much abused before.

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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 7:24:00 PM
    I've been touched by your poetry, I have a feelng there is much strength inside of you despite the abuse, keep writing your lovely poetics Ravenn, I admire your candor xxx

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 8:15:00 PM
    I appreciate your honesty in this poem Ravernn Wolf. Cultivating faith is challenging at times. Thank you for sharing your feelings :)