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Candy Tasting Love

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Candy Tasting Love

                                                            Two
                                                           bodies
                                                         trembling
                                                     in the darkness
                             as love rains down and covers our drained lips...
                                 In a shower of sweetness my hands reach
                                                     inside the walls
                                                          of candy
                                                           tasting
                                                             love.
                                                    


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  1. Date: 11/4/2012 10:29:00 AM
    This is hot! It's been awhile since I came back to p.s., I always love readind your latest. Thanx for sharing!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:13:00 AM
    Awww... i have no words spoken on this poem, Michael. :)

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 10:33:00 AM
    Nothing is sweeter than true love !!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:01:00 PM
    Aweee,, how sweet is this tetractys, aweee...one can taste the rainbow of skittles from this rain.... love this one... xox....pd

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:26:00 PM
    that's a beautiful and romantic expressed poem. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Erich

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:54:00 PM
    Beautiully brilliant! The shape is perfect as well..J

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:41:00 AM
    wow, Michael, guess i've been missing out.. brilliant poem..

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Awesome and sweet poem my poet brother! Sorry my late reply,been knocked out by the flu lately.But,am back to work again and things are heading in the right direction again! Have a great NY weekend my brother and friend..Arild

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:35:00 AM
    A 10 RATING MICHAEL LUV .. PASSION SOARS SO TASTY .. YUMMY CANDY DELIGHT .. RON IS SALVATING READING THIS POEM WITH ME AT 3 A.M. AM IMAGINING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT .. OOOOHHHH... AN EXPLOSIVE EMOTION THAT SENDS LUV CRASHING THROUGH THE ROOF .. ONE OF YOUR BEST .. IF THAT IS POSSIBLE WHEN I ADORE THEM ALL .. JG IN VA VA VA VOOM MODE ..

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:51:00 PM
    Wow! So sweet and awesome poem my dear Michael. I love it! I also love the form which is not yet familiar with me. Million thanks to you for sharing and your wonderful congratulatory comments. Have a nice day always! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:31:00 PM
    Hi Michael; You must be thinking of sweet things today. Good write. Have a great day. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:37:00 PM
    SWEET poem. You can't lose with a title like this one, my friend. Good seeing a new post from you today!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:24:00 PM
    Yes! The absolute zenith of sweetness and love. Good stuff, Mike. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:42:00 PM
    An amazing poem -beautifully penned. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem Love, Michael.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 5:09:00 AM
    A lovely piece penned in the Tetractys form, romantic to the core. Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 11:59:00 PM
    Candy+Love=A passion that burns. Yummy. Love your double Tetractys. Very nice Michael!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:28:00 PM
    much passion in this piece....great write! hugs

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 4:00:00 PM
    This type of sweetness is cavity free! Good write!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 3:51:00 PM
    Holy candies! Burning passion in this romantic tetractys! Very nice, Michael! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 3:34:00 PM
    This is a special piece my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this afternoon! Michael you have brightened my mood for some candy right now...yumm, I'm having it now as we speak! This is a very delightful piece, I loved it immensely! Great Work!!

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