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FINAL BLOW by Anna Lo P

..To miss, not to miss
..A Love, not in bliss
  Tight hug, Sweet kiss 
  This one, I'll miss..

..Heart is in abyss
  Mind is in freeze 
  Body badly decrease
  Soul not in peace..  

..Time again ticks
   Like eyes that blinks
   Breath sounds like a hiss
   Must be done with this..

..It'll be the last piece
   Make it short, don't tease
   Lonely hug, Sad kiss, 
   My final blow to this...

..Don't do this,
  I say please..
  Final line is
  Just like this ...................................+
 
P.S.. I forgot, I have 9 lives, am saved by this! YES!!!
 


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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 8:23:00 PM
    clever! 1st one read and can't wait to read more.

    Lo Avatar Anna Lo
    Date: 10/24/2012 11:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Ms. Kimberly..Really? you find it clever?? well, then you must be a clever one!! :) :D...my works are just regular stuffs as compared to yours & the rest of the writers here in PS..but I'm grateful that you'd enjoyed reading it..Thanks again..and I'll do the same to support your works too!..Anna
  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:20:00 PM
    Anna, take care of ALL your 9 lives. - Very well written!! Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Lo Avatar Anna Lo
    Date: 10/20/2012 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ms. Anna, my many thanks to you again for not failing to read my works.. yours are a lot greater than mine, absolutely!! thanks for the wishes & have a nice weekend to you too! :) - Anna Lo xoxo
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:28:00 PM
    Anna this is like a boxing match, ducking and diving fast moving, excellent, I like it..David

    Lo Avatar Anna Lo
    Date: 10/19/2012 1:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ..that's the last piece I have done since then.. mind totally blown away..can't think of any poems to make..until then, wait for the next rematch, just like in boxing.:D Anna
    Lo Avatar Anna Lo
    Date: 10/19/2012 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi David, thanks as always..for I never fail to amuse you with works..:D..Anyways, I thought that others might find the title a bit obscene/vulgar (greenminded), you know!?! :).. At that moment, I felt like my mind's gonna Blow, catching my breath, & running out of time...'Tic-Tac-Tac..say it & make it quick'.. so the words I used aren't that much either...