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Flaming Fire Crackled

flaming fire crackled
ranging venom of cruel souls
thousands of hope dashed
burning ember raised its hands
the world united in grief

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 5:35:00 AM

    great write Modupe,smell the smoke lol

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:25:00 PM

    Intense and sad, Modupe!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Excellent tanka here Modupe.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:13:00 AM

    Very expressive work..I can feel the emotion in this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:09:00 AM

    thank you for your congratulatory comment..enjoyed this wonderful tanka.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:30:00 AM

    I share your grief. You've said it all, with so few words.