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Wish

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Wish

Whispering heartache unfolds in torture
Incisions decorate the outside of you
See the river of lost hope unfold in a pond of red
How many will know you are dead

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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:16:00 AM
    awesome acrostic...a great read for sure!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 5:41:00 AM
    A very well written poem, Rebecca. Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:31:00 AM
    Dark & deep. Powerfully done!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 1:32:00 AM
    Thought provoking piece.... great flow, tyvm karen

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 10:47:00 PM
    Oooh. Chilling read. Always, Laura