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Victory

                                               Hid in a nest of my own
                                            Silent and dark, kept alone

                                            Remain here since the start
                                            The other life, barely a part

                                        Walls crack with glimpses of light
                                         Eyes adjust, possible end in site

                                       A world so vast stretches to the sea
                                           Arms expand, finally I am free

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:32:00 PM

    I really enjoyed the read of this one, Erin. I imagined a stowaway waiting to get off a ship or someone hidden and watching the sea, waiting to explore it. Lovely.

    S Avatar Erin S Date: 10/23/2012 9:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it
  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:36:00 AM

    The power of the sea. The power of being free, once you discover you've had the ability all along. Wonderful lines!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 11:40:00 PM

    Awesome verse! I loved it! The ending was perfect. Nicely written. :) Always, Laura

    S Avatar Erin S Date: 10/23/2012 9:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much :)