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hoping for sunshine

 When the stormy sea
crashes like thunder upon
your wind tossed vessel
and lightning rips the dark  sky
all you hope for is sunshine

As the storm subsides
and the sky returns to blue
your hope will shine through
the sun will shine much brighter
As a  rainbow paints the sky

10-16-2012......................................(1)

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 11:39:00 AM

    A perfect read for the day, we had several days of rain but the sunshine is shining as brightly as this poem today.

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:33:00 PM

    Joseph..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Very uplifting a depiction of sun power and hope thanks Joseph for this gem and congrats on the win, hugs vie

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:59:00 PM

    Congrats for your win with this very lovely tanka set!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 11:18:00 AM

    CONGRATS JOSEPH ON A REMARKABLE WRITE AND WELL DESERVED WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:58:00 AM

    Big congratulations on you win Joseph, I like this one xx

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:09:00 AM

    Nice use of emotion ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 8:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Debbie
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank ypu Carol
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:33:00 AM

    Congratulations Joseph for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for the win Leonora....May the sun shine always in your life too...love
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:43:00 PM

    these are so good Joseph, if for the contest, good luck...

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 7:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Harry
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:57:00 AM

    A very soothing read. Tremendous descriptive qualities... loved the images in the last stanza.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Carol
  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Those storms of life can get very scary sometimes..Great encouraging work that you have penned ...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sara
  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:28:00 PM

    a pretty one that shines with hope.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 10/16/2012 8:29:00 PM

    I like it.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/29/2012 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Doreen
  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:14:00 PM

    and with that sunshine would come a pretty rainbow...nice images...good write, i enjoyed your tanka :)

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 10/16/2012 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sandra....i like that idea...its a great one...