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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:26:00 PM
    Very deep....Something fishy I do say.I'm almost afraid to comment. Ha,ha.

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:47:00 PM
    I respect your research and sober yet passionate assessment Scribe - with a modicum of study anyone would realize that those buildings collapsed via 'controlled demolition' - it 'took balls' to post this composition which will suredly defy some naive belifs out there about 911 - great balance of art & history my friend - no doubt that 911 was a 'false flag operation' - preach on! J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:46:00 AM
    this is gritty realism taken to new heights, marlon... grreat job!.. wow; huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 2:14:00 PM
    this is brilliant Marlon, going to p2

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:11:00 PM
    Holy Smoke! You have really laid it on the line in this one. Wow! I am so impressed. Magnificent poem! hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:05:00 PM
    Well written piece my friend. A day imprinted in all of us. Your a wonderful poet. Now on to read part 2. Michael

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:54:00 PM
    Profoundly moving, thinking of that day. It was stunning to my students. The day the world changed, and I ws there kind of thing.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:39:00 PM
    Powerful poem .... a day no one will or should forget. - (I read part 2 first, sorry ...) xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:35:00 AM
    Powerful write and very thought provoking. Great piece penned. And a belated thanks for my placement in your contest. This was a lovely theme I so enjoyed doing.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:33:00 AM
    intense write, marlon.. makes me ponder,, greeat work!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 3:58:00 PM
    This is an awesome write of yours which I enjoy reading this morning my dear friend, Scribe! I love your lyric. It's great! Thank you so much for sharing this poem/story and my awesome win in your contest. Million thanks to you! Have a wonderful day always! ;) love, LG

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 1:35:00 PM
    Scribe, wow..this poem makes me say,,'' you see I was right..."some one new something"... Marlon, this poem is very powerful, you can say you are putting prospective in order, with your perception. I am one who never leaves the 911 issue alone. I still research the incident till this day. something was just not right, and made no sense. All it took was 3o minutes, to kill 3000 + leaving nothing but ashes with no bones. Thank you for sharing your relentlessness through poetry, take care :-) PD

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:29:00 PM
    Excellent read my friend. Great story teller you are. Very enjoyed. Michael

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:03:00 PM
    Wow this is brilliant you better watch out before the U.S. marshalls come for your secrets told lol Bangin