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Take A Look PT 1

Take A Look Part1

Tower 1.....

The crowing of rooster's, wake the world to the scheme
Dropping those towers profited billions in c.r.e.a.m. (cash rules everything around me)
Somebody knew something, so who's really the coward
The president in the chair, or the chairs that drove them planes in them towers
In the name of the benevolent and some virgin wives
Martyrdom penetrating some virgin lives
That's the picture portrayed for our virgin eyes
The breaking of bread, so it was co-conspired
Need some brainwashed soldiers and plane's pre-hired
And thee exact altitude to bullseye the targets
Blueprinted inner workings of heartless
Inhumane playing some God sh**
That feeling under your skin, is the blood boils 
America stepped on a venomous snake that was coiled
Seducing the serpent, to extract out its oil
Since The Garden snakes has never been loyal
A Fed snake doesn't bite the hands that feed him
Just the ones who dangle dead bait to mislead them
Wool over their eyes, and here(US) it's lost lives
It was insurance policies
And Bullsh** apologies
Fine print paperwork loopholed lottery
You spend 15 million and get 7 billion back
3 and a half billion, for each building, per terrorism act
Now let's do the math
Returning over 4600 percent on the deposit
Small price for 3000 skeletons in the closet!

By Scribe ML


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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:26:00 PM

    Very deep....Something fishy I do say.I'm almost afraid to comment. Ha,ha.

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:47:00 PM

    I respect your research and sober yet passionate assessment Scribe - with a modicum of study anyone would realize that those buildings collapsed via 'controlled demolition' - it 'took balls' to post this composition which will suredly defy some naive belifs out there about 911 - great balance of art & history my friend - no doubt that 911 was a 'false flag operation' - preach on! J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:46:00 AM

    this is gritty realism taken to new heights, marlon... grreat job!.. wow; huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 2:14:00 PM

    this is brilliant Marlon, going to p2

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:11:00 PM

    Holy Smoke! You have really laid it on the line in this one. Wow! I am so impressed. Magnificent poem! hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:05:00 PM

    Well written piece my friend. A day imprinted in all of us. Your a wonderful poet. Now on to read part 2. Michael

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Profoundly moving, thinking of that day. It was stunning to my students. The day the world changed, and I ws there kind of thing.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:39:00 PM

    Powerful poem .... a day no one will or should forget. - (I read part 2 first, sorry ...) xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:35:00 AM

    Powerful write and very thought provoking. Great piece penned. And a belated thanks for my placement in your contest. This was a lovely theme I so enjoyed doing.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:33:00 AM

    intense write, marlon.. makes me ponder,, greeat work!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 3:58:00 PM

    This is an awesome write of yours which I enjoy reading this morning my dear friend, Scribe! I love your lyric. It's great! Thank you so much for sharing this poem/story and my awesome win in your contest. Million thanks to you! Have a wonderful day always! ;) love, LG

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 1:35:00 PM

    Scribe, wow..this poem makes me say,,'' you see I was right..."some one new something"... Marlon, this poem is very powerful, you can say you are putting prospective in order, with your perception. I am one who never leaves the 911 issue alone. I still research the incident till this day. something was just not right, and made no sense. All it took was 3o minutes, to kill 3000 + leaving nothing but ashes with no bones. Thank you for sharing your relentlessness through poetry, take care :-) PD

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/17/2012 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and i mean you are unstoppable...
  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:29:00 PM

    Excellent read my friend. Great story teller you are. Very enjoyed. Michael

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:03:00 PM

    Wow this is brilliant you better watch out before the U.S. marshalls come for your secrets told lol Bangin