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Aligning

Aligning perhaps it was a karma sign, where once before a different life time, sow to reap begins to chime, we suffer here, it aint divine? possible payback for the crime, what would i know, it's the hurting mime, ironic patterns divining, your planet is aligning , with mine? re:"Falsely Imprisoned" Cecilia Macfarlane Don Johnson

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:48:00 PM

    "It's the hurting mime,/ironic patterns divining,/your planet is aligning,/with mine?"!! Awesome ending, Don! Great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:49:00 AM

    An excellent way to write of this injustice, this is so good Don...

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 4:19:00 PM

    Incredible my friend, simply an incredible write! I really enjoyed this fascinating poem Don, you have done masterfully! What an intriguing piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 3:36:00 PM

    Don yep life is cruel at times, good take on it ....Dave

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 3:18:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Glad that I chose it to read..Sara

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 3:03:00 PM

    Hola, Don i love the order of your poem. creative...xox..pd