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TONIGHT by Anna Lo P

..The clock ticks, the Time pass
  Coffee I sip, as I taste, Alas!
  One more cigarette, almost up,
  What else is with me, me, still up!

  Waiting for the green light
  Beside your name in chat
  This computer, is already hot
  It's been on, since I last woke up!

  I don't know, I don't care,
  If they say, I look like a scare
  Eyes that look like of an owl
  Since I've been up like a fowl!

  To write another piece
  Of my sadness, of my tears
  The songs I always play
  Make my heart feel in dismay!

  Up all day till night
  Because my heart is in fright
  Will he then tell me"it's not alright"
  That is something I need to fight!

  Oh my! please give me a sign
  To be in sorrow, or should I be fine?
  It feels I'm running out of time
  That's how I feel, for all this time!

  The clock ticks, the Time pass
   Another coffee sips, I say Alas!
   Another cigarette I lit, just to be up
   What else is with me? just a memory on recap!..
  
   
    

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:40:00 PM
    Anna, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

    Lo Avatar Anna Lo
    Date: 1/1/2013 12:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Ms.PD..Happy Holidays!..same wishes I give to you and your family as well. and to everyone here in PoetrySoup community!.. Happy New Year Ma'am.. -Anna xoxo :)
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:30:00 PM
    being in pain makes you motivate your skills, ok lng yan makabawi din tayo dyan.. kung gusto mo check allpoetry.com mas malaking site to move up your skills, may mga instructor at courses if you want. mas maraming contest for inspiration mostly mas maraming kaibigang makikilala.. regards, jett

    Lo Avatar Anna Lo
    Date: 2/4/2013 9:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello my Poet friend!.. I just reviewed this one & I forgot to make a reply.. silly me!.. anyway, thanks again for your delightful & helpful comments to my poems!.. Godbless you & your family my 'pen friend'.. Anna xoxo
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:30:00 AM
    oh my! anna lo, I just love this poem, so lovely, so nice, it moves my imagination :)

    Lo Avatar Anna Lo
    Date: 11/4/2012 2:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Joselito, thank you for your always liking my writes.. that was the last one i made, already been 3wks I guess since then.. but I hope I can comeback sooner so that I won't lost 'touch' of a little talent in writing ordinary simple poems for the rest to enjoy.. Again thank you so much and have a nice day again..Anna
  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:13:00 AM
    Hi Ms.Cynthia,.. it's my pleasure that you liked it!. I don't really mind if I have categorized the poem differently.. I'm just an ordinary individual wanting to say what I feel/or have felt in each poems I make/have made. Thanks a lot. I will do also my share of reading thw works of others, like yours, to inspire people like me!..be blessed. Anna

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 9:11:00 PM
    It's too sad the heart does not protect from pain...another cigarette then say a prayer... I do love an appreciate your verse. Cynthia

    Lo Avatar Anna Lo
    Date: 10/19/2012 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "Hi Ms.Cynthia,.. it's my pleasure that you liked it!. I don't really mind if I have categorized the poem differently.. I'm just an ordinary individual wanting to say what I feel/or have felt in each poems I make/have made. Thanks a lot. I will do also my share of reading thw works of others, like yours, to inspire people like me!..be blessed. Anna"