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Fall into Spring

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Fall into Spring

Autumn sun is going down, down, down.
Red leaves are turning brown, brown, brown.
Swift geese are flying south, south, south.
Hot cocoa warms my mouth, mouth, mouth.

The air is blowing cold, cold, cold.
Cornfields are growing old, old, old.
Blue skies change to gray, gray, gray.
I wish fall could stay, stay, stay.

Bonfire flames shoot high, high, high
Into the starry sky, sky, sky.
The only thing I fear, fear, fear
Is winter drawing near, near, near.

Bright colors start to fade, fade, fade
Into the darkness of the shade, shade, shade.
White snow mounds up in piles, piles, piles
And goes on for miles, miles, miles.

North wind chills my bones, bones, bones.
Frigid river creeps and moans, moans, moans.
This season seems too long, long, long
Till warm sun shines strong, strong, strong.

When flowers pop and bloom, bloom, bloom.
Their fragrance lifts my gloom, gloom, gloom.
Then my heart will sing, sing, sing,
Finally it’s SPRING, SPRING, SPRING!

Susan Burd ©2010

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:07:00 AM
    Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Susan. :)I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:23:00 AM
    It definately brings it's own rhythm with it and is so very unique... Facinating... I am right, right, right! LOL... It was fun to read, read, read.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 6:43:00 AM
    Love this unique concept... think I might steal it! Oh no did I say steal!!! Borrow... yes borrow! You are so good at creating neat stuff! Hugs, happy thoughts and mucho love, Jack

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    Date: 10/17/2012 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the positive comments, my friend. I want children to 'savor' the lines as they read.