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Sleep PD Sleep

Sleep, pd, sleep

Sleep, pd, sleep,  peacefully at last
It’s now or never for a lass.
Free from the pressure of peer group
Family  and poetry soup
Letting the restaurant rest awhile
Resting your fertile head in style
Throw all your fears out and sleep
I will see that nobody peeps
All you own will be in safe keep
I’ll be on guard against all creeps.
Sleep, pd, sleep, peacefully at last
It’s now or never for a lass.

16/Oct/2012
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
For pd's 'Send me to sleep'

For PD's 'Make me smile' contest this time on 7 mar 13

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  1. Date: 3/18/2013 12:48:00 PM

    Jag, congrats on your win with this sweet lullabye for PD! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 5:10:00 AM

    Belated Congratulations on your win! Lori

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Congrats Jag..nice job...Donna

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:48:00 PM

    Congrats, Jag. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. Ralph

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 10:38:00 PM

    Wonderful write and win. Many Congrats.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 4:53:00 AM

    Very beautiful and peaceful couplet, Jag...A fine tribute to a fine lady...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 7:33:00 PM

    Thank you JAg, for the nice and simple smile.... "CONGRATULATIONS!" and goodnight ;-)...PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 11:03:00 AM

    Congratulations friend for winning 3rd place in PD’s “Send Me To Sleep” contest. Cheers!! (^_^) love Maria

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem winning in P.D.'s "Send me to sleep...." contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 12:38:00 AM

    SUPER CONGRATS JAG ON A FINE WIN BY SLEEPY PD LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 10:08:00 AM

    HOw cute this is. BIG congrats for your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 3:34:00 AM

    Big congratulations Jag, I think its nap time now ...zzzz xx

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:37:00 PM

    Jag, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome poem. :-) thank you for the ZZZZZZZZZZ's~ in my "Send me to sleep....... contest" enjoyed the comfort and thought ~Always & Forever * PD

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:21:00 AM

    Ahhh!! So kind for PD..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review is appreciated..Sara

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:34:00 AM

    A SENSATIONAL LULLABY FOR PD TO LAY HER WEARY HEAD UPON AND SLEEP SWEETLY JAG. WINNING WISHES LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:36:00 AM

    so soothing and well scribed,jag... makes me fee restful... good work!.. :) hugggs

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Great poem for our lovely PD...I would tell her to take an Ambien and get a sound machine if I wrote her a lullaby...hahaha...in a great mood today with our Indian Summer! :) Best of luck with this uniquely personalized entry! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:42:00 PM

    This is a beautiful lullabye for PD. It is good for the contest. I wish you luck. I too hope she gets some sleep. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:17:00 PM

    A lullaby! Lovely! Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 11:38:00 AM

    Jag, wonderful, just wonderful...David

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:34:00 AM

    Sweet lullaby for PD here Jag.Enjoyed very much.

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:50:00 AM

    Fun to read your contribution to the contest jag - :) Hope you will win, good luck. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)