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Another Love

Another Love

You hold me in thrall
Charm me with your demeanor
And draw me to you
Like a kindergarten kid 
Is, by a wayside puddle.

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  1. cornish Avatar
    craig cornish
    Date: 12/20/2012 12:39:00 PM
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    Jag, many congrats on you win
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/20/2012 6:02:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win Jag this is superb just love that last line xx
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/19/2012 8:44:00 PM
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    Jag :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/19/2012 4:08:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win, Jag. This was a sweet analogy
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    Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/17/2012 10:43:00 PM
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    Never the less quite natural & deft articulation Jag - the puddle metaphor is brilliant - J.A.B. %
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/17/2012 2:21:00 PM
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    very sweet, Jag. YOu are my last Look-see for the afternoon. thanks for your comment and I hope to see you soon!
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 10/17/2012 12:03:00 PM
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    Totally fun imaginative write! Who in the world demands such things as a poem--u have to be in the mood to write..it cannot be forced out like water! Anyways, this is stupendous...gwendolen
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 10/16/2012 11:24:00 AM
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    Enjoyed your Tanka tonight Jag! ;)
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 10/16/2012 2:43:00 AM
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    Lovely small poem jag - well written tanka. - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 10/16/2012 2:37:00 AM
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    good one Jaggery...who is this impatient friend of yours...hasty but tasty tanka..
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    kash poet
    Date: 10/16/2012 2:09:00 AM
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    Lovely tanka here Jag!Enjoyed.


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