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SUMMER TIDES

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SUMMER TIDES



 
warmth of evening lake

bathes our eyes in summer tides

as August awaits

  the closing of moon's flowers...

  we release our farewell kiss




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For Nathan’s Tanka (Season) Contest 
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:09:00 AM
    Glad that I chose this winner to read today..I do like those moon flowers..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:33:00 PM
    romantic and beautiful, Nette. Congrats in the contest.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:16:00 AM
    CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS SUNNY SUMMER TIDES WRITE ..

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:53:00 PM
    HI NETTE,,,, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 7:03:00 PM
    this is beautiful...i was drawn in by the title...glad i read it...great poem!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 5:50:00 AM
    A wondurful tanka by you Net loved this one very much........spandan.

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 9:42:00 PM
    Well I'll vote for this one to win,,,, have a great day Nette ;}

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:23:00 PM
    You create a wonderful scene with this tanka--lovely imagery. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 3:13:00 PM
    very lovely!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:07:00 PM
    SO SO PRETTY NETTE LUV .. A LITTLE SAD TO SEE SUMMER TIDES WAVW GOODBYE AND OH THOSE MOON FLOWERS .. DELIGHTFUL AROMA .. SENDING WINNING WISHES TO U ..

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 11:57:00 AM
    A stunning scene like only you can paint Nette, all the best for the contest ;) *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:29:00 AM
    Your season looks spectacular Nette, thinking of you and hope you are well, peace love and light, may you be blessed today and always, Vienna

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:54:00 AM
    Yes! I absolutely love this my friend! I can feel the end of summer near with this incredible write! You have brought upon the ending the start of Autumn to bring...eventually soon that is! I really enjoyed this delightful piece that you've so illustriously brought forth for me to absorb in its fullness! "The closing of moon's flowers..." beautifully crafted line, I just love it! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:19:00 AM
    Beautiful Nette. All the best for the contest.

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:58:00 AM
    Beautiful Tanka, nette, closing of moon's flowers is liked much,.. feel honored that you are asking for something new from me, come, visit, there is one just for u, hurriedly made, tho!!:) jag

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:21:00 AM
    Wonderful tanka here Nette.Not received your soupmail.Send a freash soupmail.Donot send it from soupmail's reply option.It's not working.

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:51:00 PM
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