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Gathering Evil Dust

The evil dust floats down from the darkened sky The bats go in and out of the grey matter The witches use the dust from which they imply Evil is done here, spells are left to scatter They collect their due and walk up to their house Pumpkins are all lit, scaring even the mouse The dead trees start to catch on fire, bringing fear Hatred lurks in hard crevices, death is near
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 12:49:00 AM

    AN EERIE SETTING WITH STRONG IMAGERY RUSSELL LUV .. VISUAL EFFECTIVENESS TO ENJOY A SPOOKY TREAT .. BATS STILL MAKE ME CRINGE RUSSELL LUV .. I SAW A MOVIE "NIGHTWING" ABOUT THESE NASTY CREATURES AND IT WAS TERRIFYING LUV .. GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND ..

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 12:35:00 AM

    this is beyond amazing, russell... i sensde a kind of foreboding and the total mood scared the wits out of me ( that's a compliment!)... horrorifically superb my friend.. best wishes and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:48:00 PM

    Well c rafdted Halloween poem, Russell, you have mage going outside too scary.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:25:00 PM

    SPOOKY SPOOKY SPOOKY Enjoyed your verse, it gave me chills, hugs vie

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Magnificent feeling of Halloween fright in this delightful poem you penned here. Much enjoyed as usual. Big hugs, Gail