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As Beautiful As You

We are having our front and back garden done
All we can see now is rubbish by the ton
Yet I know when the gardener is through
It will make our house beautiful just like you

We will also be changing the inside around
Due to the conservatory on the back ground
New bathroom and bedroom also to do
To make our house as beautiful as you

All things around us will be altered and changed
It will make all the mayhem seem less deranged
I have you to share it with you will see that it’s true
Our home will be just as beautiful as you

With everything finished sit back in repose
No sight of a flower not even a rose
Yet a flower I espy and very close too
It is you in our house that’s as beautiful as you

I hope this verse will remove some of the worry
For I know it will not happen all in a hurry
When the work is finished I will know what to do
Enjoy our house that’s as beautiful as you

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  1. Date: 10/18/2012 3:31:00 PM

    You set the bar high for all husbands out here. Well done my friend. Michael

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:09:00 AM

    I agree with all the comments. Plus this - such a wonderful tribute to your special lady (wife)

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 8:27:00 PM

    ..Hi Rob... owwwee .. sorry Owen..so sweet and full of romance...your have made all the readers enjoyed so much !!!!congratulation ...<3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:53:00 PM

    Hello Mrs Owens...join the soup, we want to get to know a wonderful woman like you whose hubby writes poetry for her...in her appreciation...

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 10/15/2012 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Yasmin my name is Owen i am the husband and i wrote this for my wife, thanks for the comment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:33:00 AM

    All your eye can see ..... Everything is lovely like, "you" ..... I think you have an exceptional and lovely wife, Owen. And of course she is lucky to have a husband who writes beautiful poem for her. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 10/15/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne Lise thanks for the comment, all the best Owen