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Floods

                                                               river
                                                          dark, cold
                                             raging, rushing, haunting
                                             water, soil, sticks, stones
                                            mixing, tracing, challenging
                                                   lonely, desperate
                                                              minds

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  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:02:00 AM

    Lovely! Love how you've done your Diamante - the show of emotion blended with the raging river gives an interesting perspective to the poem. Nice!

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Perfection!! Love it! Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:45:00 PM

    HI, Sandra, saw that pretty blonde hair of yours in the community pictures and thought I would see your poems. I can't remember if I have ever talked with you before but I remember someone once mentioned a Sandra to me that was on site. I like reading short poems such as this one of yours. Let me go see your other diamente.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 12:36:00 AM

    ah.. the floods...well descripted work Sandra...nice share..enjoyed..luv SK <3

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:24:00 PM

    Hola Sandra, once again.. Awe, another nice Diamante, i see this flood leading lots of minds into fear... enjoyed..pd