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Waking

Somber dreams, pierced by morning light Dawn’s tight woven tapestry Unfurled upon the night Countenances now so cheerful Not nearly now so fearful As last they were when wrap’t in fur Those faces of the night The gladsome glow, so warm to know Giving chase to gloom throughout the land Birds, beasts, snakes mice and men alike Shaken rudely awake By sol’s harsh hand Allowed no more In tranquil sleep to lay Summoned forth To face new day E’en thru keyholes and cracks so tiny… Seeps suns persistent Probing touch Telling us tacitly… Yet pray tell with great tenacity Arise! Arise! Open wide your eyes! You’ve slept friend, quite enough!

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:08:00 PM
    As usual your rhyme is superb and imaginative. I enjoyed this one very much David.

    Whalen Avatar David Whalen
    Date: 10/16/2012 8:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Raz, I tried to make this sound as old-fashioned and archaic as I am. That's a hard thing to do! Nice to hear from you and incidentally the showcase is almost back to it's old self. I actually got a personal apology from managment! I think a few sarcastic poems helped too.
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:40:00 PM
    Love this one,awesome

    Whalen Avatar David Whalen
    Date: 10/16/2012 8:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Susan, for reading me and commenting. You will probably be receiving a comment or two in the next few days from me after I've looked over your port.
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:35:00 PM
    I really enjoyed it, thank you!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:34:00 PM
    Very nice poem you have written here. Bravo!

    Whalen Avatar David Whalen
    Date: 10/16/2012 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading me Jon. I went to your blog and was taken aback by the sheer volume of your work. It's gonna take me a while to find the one that I like the best. but I will do that!