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Very Good Day

The thunderstorm washed away last night
Everything bad on earth
The rain took all the chalk away
So today, is a very good day

The trees are green though it's October
And the sun is shining so clearly
The gentle wind makes the tall trees sway
Yes today is a very good day

I smile when I step out of artificial light
Into the warmth of the autumn sun
I'm begging the peaceful feeling, "stay-
'cause today is a very good day"


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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:38:00 PM

    Such an uplifting piece, something the world is in dire need of, thank you Juli-Michelle for your kind visit, hug vie

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:06:00 PM

    A very well written piece. Very enjoyed. Michael

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:57:00 PM

    I'm so glad you had a nice day - it had been a sunny day here. - Like a good poem - and this is good J-M. - Have a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)