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Blossom

rosebud opens
between the petals
one raindrop

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  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:01:00 AM

    Ahhh...very nice!!!

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:51:00 PM

    This is precious. I think it's my favorite of your haiku. Well, I can see you have not been here long, so you are not the Sandra I had heard about, but welcome to Soup and keep up with your magic pen!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:56:00 PM

    very nice write Sandra,, I enjoy your great share...thank you <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:12:00 PM

    A nice haiku! I have a good, middle line for you. Petals dilate in night wind. You could use 'one teardrop glistens' for the last line. Still, you have written a good haiku, and I complement you on your worthy endeavor.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:14:00 PM

    Beautiful images here Sandra.Yep,its amazing how much can be said with such few words:) Excellent!! Take Care Always~

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2012 3:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much, your words are so kind :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:50:00 PM

    Great imagery Sandra, enjoyed your haiku, amazing how a few words can give an image such power, lovely, Vie

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your wonderful reply :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:42:00 PM

    Like a tear in an eye. Well done!! Big hugs Michael

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 10/14/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs, Thank you! :)