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HEART TO HEART

When my eyes are closed,I see your elegance
Possessing  handful of enviable  radiance
On the mountain top, I view you
Holding you is what I can't hesitate to do
Spark of joy in my heart at the beach shore
That is why I say I need some more
Every man wants you on twitter
But you say no;not even later
Our love I secure with a barbwire
Because it is only you I admire
Jewel fairer than words of wonderous virtue
Every sculptor wants  to have your statue
Girl you are my hope in the wilderness of shame
The candle that produce nice blue flame
I promise to make you warm in my arm
Cos a thousand mile you are far from harm.

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  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:40:00 PM

    Paschal Aroke... nice to see this one again ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:53:00 AM

    I am stopping back to see if you have added any new poems to your list. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry with the world Paschal. You have taken a big step here and I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will check back again another day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:03:00 AM

    Hi Paschal welcome to the soup, I really like this very moving write, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:55:00 AM

    What a lovely write Paschal! Thanks for sharing it..and thank you for your comment on my poem! Much love.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 6:21:00 AM

    This is lovely Paschal! I like your lovely use of phrases. The image of securing love with a barbedwire - clever. Nice!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:07:00 PM

    PASCHAL, your poem is awesome, thank you for sharing your pen.. always :-) PD

    Aroke Avatar Paschal Aroke Date: 10/15/2012 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot.
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:14:00 PM

    lovely,soooo sweet your passion,great write Paschal,welcome to the Soup

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Beautiful poem. Well done! :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 9:31:00 AM

    Nicely worded love poem.Highly figurative.Simple language used. understandable by all