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Autumn in the Air

September creeps close
August hangs on stubbornly
Subtle hints of Fall...
An odd tingling in the air,
A slight shudder in the trees

Tim Ryerson
For Russel's 'Up in the Autumn air' contest
10/14/2012

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:10:00 AM

    lovely autumn poem

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:39:00 PM

    i can hear that tingling and see the shutter through the trees...good haiku!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:18:00 PM

    This is a good Tanka for this time of the year. Thank you for your nice comment on my poem ( Sister ). Many blessings Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:00:00 AM

    an awesome autumn tanka, probably my favorite of all these ones posted in a row. Love visiting lots of tankas!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:00:00 PM

    good thing it was only a small vibrate... love the upcoming air approaching... always~PD

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 9:09:00 AM

    love it Tim. Now it's October and November is pushing in. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:17:00 PM

    A killer last line! Great job, Tim! Best of luck in Russell's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:08:00 PM

    Definitely! Well done Tim! Good luck in the contest! :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Tim, I am enjoying reading all of the Autumn poems and this one is no exception, well done....David

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 9:57:00 AM

    I love it!!! That's what I felt when I witnessed autumn for the first time in my life when I went abroad. I don't have Autumn in my country it is not very noticed.