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Sleepy Trees

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Sleepy Trees

The trees are yawning,
carelessly shedding their clothes
for sweet winter sleep
Like spoiled children who know well
daddy will clean up their mess...

For PD's 'October poems only' contest

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  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:20:00 PM
    well done Tim ....love <3 SKAT

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:20:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Tim

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:21:00 AM
    This is a nice poem friend,Congratulation on your win

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:22:00 PM
    Tim, thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17074&PoetID=18720 ------ always~ LINDA ~

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 2:47:00 PM
    Absolutely charming! Love it. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:29:00 PM
    Tim, Belated congrats on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:26:00 PM
    It so deserved to be on top ten!! Congrats!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:22:00 PM
    Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Tim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:05:00 AM
    CONGRATS TIM ON AN INCREDIBLE WRITE AND WIN LUV .. AWESOME WORK .. GO SAINTS .. I AM ROOTING FOR THEM AS WELL AS MY GIANTS ..

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:56:00 PM
    Isn't that the truth!! Only at my house, it is mommy too that has to haul out the rake........and we have heaps to sweep up!! Delightful poem, Tim!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:49:00 PM
    TIM, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:59:00 AM
    hahaha, love the comparison to daddy cleaning up those messy leaves! Very fun one.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:06:00 PM
    HELLO, TIM,,, I'M BACK AFTER DOUBLE VISITING MY MOM :-(... ABOUT YOUR POEM... LOVE IT...XOX~PD

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 6:55:00 PM
    Really creative wording, each line has a unique message and the whole poem is alive with a wonderful picture of autumn!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:53:00 AM
    A nice autumn poem to contest Tim, wish you good luck - hope you win. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 9:58:00 AM
    WOW!! Love it really!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:49:00 AM
    This is great Tim. A new slant on that ole autumn theme. Very original.