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SWEET TALKING, SLEEPWALKING

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SWEET TALKING, SLEEPWALKING


Dreaming,
When a peach smile hangs on moonbeam
How the roses become your christened lips,
While I hold my restrained gleam 
My sleepwalking queen.

Pearl dew, 
Let’s douse in slow-drags, made for two 
While curls of tossed hair perfumes air of bay
I feel the blue night of you
Blue night so, so new. 

...And when grasses breathe long
Just linger by my side,
Let time not wait...
For you are my one song;
Here, stardust abides
On wisps of soft jazz rides...

Come, love
Dusk bears new morns ; I’m yours, love
As glow of whispers light fireflies
Sweet talking , I’ll leave no more sighs
No, no goodbyes.


*inspired by musical versions of Johnny and Santo,
 Ventures,  and Jeff Beck


Sleepwalk Contest of Craig Cornish
by nette onclaud



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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:26:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win SO glad to be back! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:21:00 AM
    Big congrats on a beautiful write and win nette xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:18:00 AM
    very well deserved win . BIG congrats to you, Nette.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:05:00 AM
    CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A MAGNIFICENT SET OF LYRICAL WORDS TO SLEEPWALK MELODY AND A FABULOUS WIN TOO .. WOW

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:50:00 AM
    Both you're such a great poet and song writer, Nette! I really love it! So beautiful! Congratulations on your win! hugs:) Leonora/Norie

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 12:22:00 AM
    Congratulations Nette.....Seren

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:17:00 PM
    Nette, your poetry as always is special.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:12:00 PM
    Hi Nette, congratulations with your awesome poem in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest :-) take care~PD

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:20:00 PM
    An awesome poem you have penned and good luck in the contest. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:52:00 PM
    NETTE, your poem is awesome, thank you for sharing your pen.. always :-) PD

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Andrea is right. You do this form so well. Love how your words spill and flow where they are supposed too. Hugs n a kiss on the cheek. Luv Michael

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:00:00 PM
    This is spectacular my friend, simply wonderful! I really enjoyed this very delightful and intriguing poem! You have written a fabulous and amazing write Nette! I love your descriptions you have so illustriously portrayed withing this wondrous poem! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:22:00 AM
    This is lovely, Nette. You do this form of poetry very well. I hope to try it today as well.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 9:40:00 AM
    I TRIED FOR 15 MINUTES LAST NIGHT TO COMMENT ON THIS WRITE NETTE LUV .. SO FRUSTRATING .. WHAT IS GOING ON WITH PS??? GRAND WORDS AS ALWAYS WITH YOUR CERTAIN FLARE OF CREATIVE AURA .. HAPPY SUNDAY ..

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Great work that you have penned for the contest..Good luck in the contest..I haven't been able to wrap my brain around an idea to pen for the Sleepwalk contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind reviews are always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:46:00 AM
    ‡ If I Were To End This Your Amazing Poetic Read At The Close Of Merely Stanza One, Sweet Beautiful Nette, My Heart Would Smile To Be Content. But Alas, Beauty Shall Not Stop There. Smile, Upon Completion As I Believed, Your Beauty, Coloured The World A Canvas !mid This, A Spectacular Love's Cabaret. I Love It When My Spirit Twines Within Anothers Heart ? If I Could Try And Describe It In But One Word - 'Ecstasy.' A Beautiful Favourite By An Extremely Gifted, Beautiful Girl. Love, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:45:00 AM
    what can one say, but only echo the accolades of comments past, your words are truly gracious as is your pen, and the soul that drives it....

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:25:00 AM
    Ahhhh! This is so romantic, Nette!! Lovely write! Ruben.

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