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Unshaken Love

Our love is so real,
yet,we can`t be together,
Silly tradition...
Families at loggerheads,
how can love be so painful?

Past haunts the present,
but our love is unshaken,
despite parents row,
We`re ready to break this seal
and remain close til death parts...




CONTEST:"Tanka -Love and Marriage" sponsored by Sandylvy Davis

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 12:32:00 AM

    this is so enduring in its language and form,olu.. nice to see around!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:00:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your contest entry...Good luck in the contest..Winner for sure..Soup mail soon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:22:00 AM

    this is a very nice one about the bonds of family. I bet yours are strong!!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 5:50:00 AM

    This is lovely Arowolo! It's sad but so many couples are separated due to traditions and family. I like how you've concluded - break the seal - that's the only way to move foward. Nice!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 7:33:00 AM

    This is an awesome tanka that you've penned, Olesegun! I love it! Good luck and best wishes always! love/hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:13:00 PM

    Hello O.A., love can be evil and painful.. my love life is a nightmare at times... enjoyed your tanka's.. good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:13:00 PM

    Olusegun love everything about this sad tale, well done and best of luck....David

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:15:00 PM

    Love is real.. congrats