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SOAKED

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Below is the poem entitled SOAKED which was written by poet treisha williams. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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SOAKED

As far as I can see
This wet was meant to be
like the dew on flowers

like the ocean for fish
like river for crawfish
I feel so good and free

I get so wet, so wet
from head to toe I know
I tremble and quivver

I linger and linger
under the fountain stay
soaking up this freshness

feeling out of control
enjoying the cold heat
Every drop, every beat

My imagination 
of love spread out like sea
you and me together
this love was meant to be

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:49:00 AM
    Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Treisha. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week so please write some and share. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 6:46:00 PM
    A beautiful cherished memory and sweet imaginations...love this, especially the last two verse, filled with images of a poet's mind at work. Sweet write! One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 5:02:00 PM
    ‡ Returning Because I Could Not Remove This Beautiful Moment From My Mind, Sweet Beautiful Treisha. I Am Going To Favour Its, Perfect Splendour. Love, Rachel ‡

    williams Avatar treisha williams
    Date: 10/13/2012 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    but then mark, he's not really there.......lol....
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:56:00 PM
    the more i read this the more i like it

    williams Avatar treisha williams
    Date: 10/13/2012 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you mark gonna see how much i can work out that verse u r talking about. thank u rachel
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:55:00 PM
    ‡ Wow, Such A Beautiful Image, Beautiful Treisha. Tis More Fragrant To One's Senses Than The Softness, Of A Beautiful Woman. Mesmerizing And Don't Forget To Dry Off, Haha, I Know I Won't. "Beautiful." Love, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:54:00 PM
    Toaist stuff like wetness/cold/sea throughout the poem and bending the male characteristic of heat by coupling it as in cold heat. In the western tradition the tension between Apollo and Dionysian influences is heightened when you admit/celebrate to being out of control. Could a verse be worked in that would make that tension manifest. Also at the end you bring dualism male/female to a single point with "you and me together", but i assume much as you never name your object as male.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:38:00 PM
    I do not usually like this kind of stuff, but this i like, especially the first 2 verses. thanks Mark

    williams Avatar treisha williams
    Date: 10/13/2012 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you mark. this poem is actually a woman treasuring her deceased husband in her mind? hope u got it