Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership
Quote of the Day

Quote Left"A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world."Quote Right

by Joseph Addison

  |  Comment

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

True Love's Embrace

Bethany St John Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled True Love's Embrace which was written by poet Bethany St John. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Bethany St John

Best Bethany St John Poems

+ Fav Poet

True Love's Embrace

The snowflakes falling through the air
Were leaving sparkles on her hair
The moon shone down, she moved with grace
But all he could see was her angel face

They strolled along, side by side
Down a white powdery path, he held her hand with pride
This beautiful girl he loved so dear
Was just one more reason for his Christmas cheer

There were so many things we wanted to say
But her angel smile always got in the way
It was beautiful, sparkling, dazzling and bright
And his heart overflowed on this Christmas night

Then there with the moon shining down from above
He got down on one knee and promised his love
She answered with a smile and tears on her face
With a dream of tomorrow and true love's embrace

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 12:18:00 AM
    Love it all the way through ;}

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:36:00 PM
    Excellent rhymes and a fair flow. I had a great time reading this poem because it seems so real. The descriptions are very good and give it a vibrancy that I rarely see in poetry. I think you should write a lot more poems! :)

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 2:28:00 PM
    Sweet. Congrats on the selection. daver

    St John Avatar Bethany St John
    Date: 10/23/2012 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Daver! was pleasantly surprised! :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week. I enjoyed reading your work

    St John Avatar Bethany St John
    Date: 10/23/2012 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:19:00 AM
    Wow Bethany,This is a beautiful poem !!! Very well done. Anne

    St John Avatar Bethany St John
    Date: 10/18/2012 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne!!
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 6:27:00 PM
    Hi Bethany. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I see you got some comments already. You can also enter contests get mail have a blog. I love this site. Oh well keep writing and singing. Dont be a stranger. I still love this poem by the way. :)

    St John Avatar Bethany St John
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kevin! you've been so kind. I hope I can learn from you in this writing business :) you have great skill.
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 5:59:00 PM
    This is such a beautiful poem. I could see the picture developing in my mind. Great job. :)

    St John Avatar Bethany St John
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sabrina, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Just Lovely Bethany! Nicely done! The build up to the story, the rhyme and the scenery were all on point. Very nice!

    St John Avatar Bethany St John
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Vicky