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An OD Pen

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An OD Pen

That pen just lies there on the pale white blank pad page__no activity; that sorry pen has O D on something dangerous_passed out_hardly breathing..Come on pen sit up_here sip on this strong coffee..That's it click, look around, life is active, inviting_write it down..Come on now_here eat up of these grits and red-eyed gravy; now that is an eye opener..You've slept through the last rose of summer that was deep burgundy long stemmed on the bush.  You missed that lucious kiss under the pale pink rose  that on the trellis grows.  Winter is coming on, sober up, get busy for you missed the Hummingbird sip nectar from the Wild Petunia then fly away leaving hundreds of Yellow Butterflies to get intoxicated upon its blooms..So you say you are awake now..Here let me kiss you beautiful ink flowing 'pon the page!


I think my pen OD on chocolate though!!!

Sponsor: Joann Grisetti
Contest: Drunken Pen Round 2

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  1. Date: 10/20/2012 12:28:00 PM
    Congrats Sara on your win with this real funny one. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:25:00 PM
    SARA, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:38:00 AM
    great write Sara...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Sara. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:39:00 PM
    I think that some chocolate will go down well now to celebrate: Congratulations on your win, Sara. Love, Su

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 5:59:00 AM
    This is superbly beautiful, Sara. I love it. In fact, I love Prose Poetry bu I never tried it here yet. This is a winner for me. Good luck always! love and hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 5:42:00 AM
    no he has been hitting the nyquil....I saw him.

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 11:09:00 PM
    A write full ofi magination here Sara, my best wishes to you as regards a win."

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:19:00 AM
    This is a unique poem Sara -sweet, well done! Wish you luck. - Have a wonderful day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:50:00 PM
    Very well done.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 4:33:00 PM
    I think you did wonderfully with this challenge I really need to try this one. If I can just muster the courage!!! the bombs dropping was in country such as Iraq or Afghanistan.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 3:02:00 PM
    he poor drunkun pen missed everything, but I'm glad we didn't. Great job, here!

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:59:00 AM
    Great drunken entry!!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Hey Sara, you pushed that pen into a new form. Like the way you handle why the pen needs to get moving!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:34:00 PM
    Creative well written piece as usual, excellent entry for the contest a sure winner in my book.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:59:00 AM
    maybe it is all that wonderful poetry it has to write, for you, Sara, this is so good, enjoyed reading this, good luck in contest

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:59:00 AM
    Great write Sara. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:25:00 AM
    a very personal connection between you and your quill. sara... masterfully expressed and arranged!..best wishes and hugggs!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:13:00 AM
    LOVELY WAY TO OD WITH CHOCOLATE SARA .. IMPRESSIVE ENTRY JOANN IS SURE TO ENJOY .. VERY CREATIVE .. WINNING WISHES ..

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:59:00 PM
    Original art...nice Sara! Thanks for stopping by! Jimbo

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