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  1. Date: 7/16/2013 2:58:00 PM

    You my lady are drunken with talent, love this xxx

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:56:00 PM

    Loved it Yas. Many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:16:00 PM

    Yasmin, Congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 8:43:00 AM

    Yasmin ...congratulations. with your wonderful acknowledgement of this outstanding poem...Donna

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:47:00 AM

    Love to see this one again Yasmin!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:55:00 AM

    I would have placed this at the top, Yasmin!! I love this one!! One of the best!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:49:00 PM

    Yasmin Congratulations :-) with your nice and wonderful winning free verse poem~ Always & Forever* PD

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 12:15:00 PM

    I really love your take on the drunken pen...two last line...truth being told. One love, Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 9:46:00 AM

    My tears come while i'm writing. And the line makes mysterious sence. And I know the words come from above. And then I just hope its me adding to it.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:24:00 PM

    yasmin, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:45:00 AM

    congrats on your win Yasmin.....nicely done

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:57:00 AM

    Lovely poem! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:33:00 PM

    Nice write! Congratulations on your win, Yasmin. Love, Su

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:53:00 PM

    Tightly in nose, throat and head, do you have a cure for it.Varm milk & honey (?) Freezing and boiling from one minute to the other .... Have a proper cold .... atjo .... atjo ... Beautiful fall day outside my window ... atjo ... snufs ... I read your poem .... with a atjo .... snufs ... and tears rolling on my glasses. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:18:00 PM

    Super awesome poetry gone berserck,Yas!You`ll top the winner list with this amazing write:) Have a great new week ahead my friend.Nice new avatar too! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:43:00 AM

    Yas, wow this flows extremely well, a berserck quill!!!! love it, hope you had a peaceful weeekend...David

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:21:00 AM

    wow, you did incredibly well with this theme. I am jealous I can think of nothing to do such as this. The drunken pen poems so hard for me!!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 9:39:00 AM

    I have a piano on one side of my living room and a guitar on the other. My fav instrument is the pen. Beautiful write my dear sweet Yasssssssss. Hugs all day Michael

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:03:00 AM

    love the details and how your pen flows, mareey... incredibly written; my heart spills!... best wishes and huggs!.:)

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:06:00 PM

    Even brute force can not hold back the tide of tears, the need to grow and be valued, wishing you all the best! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:06:00 PM

    This is an inspirational write my friend! I really enjoyed this descriptive poem that brought forth a lovely sense of delight! What a perfect piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Excellent poem here Yas!Love this very much.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:15:00 AM

    Awesome write sweetie...just the perfect winning entry as Vie says. Take care and good rest dear and you'll soon tide over the fever. About the tanka, there's no such rule about formatting it the way I did. I just separated the pivot line.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 7:40:00 AM

    This is perfect for the drunken pen contest, sure be a winner, it won my heart from the start, go easy on the tear dear woman, I much prefer your smile, love, vie