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Here and Gone

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Here and Gone

There comes a time when one must step aside.
Leaving bits and pieces of their heart behind.
In life everything may not be what it seems.
For some it is a lesson they still must learn
Memories will be left of sweet words spoken.
Love and friendship was always freely given.
The voice only heard in the poetry they wrote.
A chapter of life has now been forever closed.
"Free Verse Writer's contest" Sponsor "Nathan" Written by: Carol ~Sunshine~Brown 8th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Hello Carol, a very emotive piece from you here I hope we do see more of your writes, hope you are keeping o k..'

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:05:00 AM

    A truth... that bares a part of our soul... Sooner or later we'll all leave PoetrySoup and our friends... and not necessarily by choice... Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 5:09:00 AM

    I love this poem Carol! Artie

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:08:00 PM

    Carol, love the verse... I love the win you have in Nathan''s contest.....xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:59:00 PM

    Carol you know you kinda have 2 end lines IF you want to save this and repost with the first 7 lines it would be a good contest entry? I do like when you write Free Verse! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 12:53:00 PM

    Beautiful words with a deep message, excellent!!!

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:57:00 AM

    Thank you !!! Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:11:00 AM

    Congratulations Carol, a beautiful write xx

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:12:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Carol

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:32:00 PM

    MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN, MY DEAR FRIEND CAROL! Love and hugs, LG

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:22:00 PM

    CONGRATS CAROL ON A MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND WIN FOR NATHAN'S FREE VERSE CHALLENGE .. AN AMAZING WORK OF ART LUV ..

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:28:00 PM

    ' Good win' Nate

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:29:00 PM

    I love this Carol..it is defintiely going on my favorite list..Juniper

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:18:00 PM

    Carol, superb job on Here and Gone. You have a rare talent

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:54:00 AM

    Great words of wisdom Carol. Great write, loved the read.

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 10:11:00 PM

    Excellently written poem of yours my dear Carol. So sad but absolutely true! It's always like a bird's passage. I love it. Thank you for sharing and all your awesome congratulatory comments on my wins! love, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 10:35:00 AM

    It's practical and happens. Absolute truth reminded. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:46:00 PM

    You were one of the first Poets to welcome me here almost 3 years ago. So I must make more time to read and appreciate your friendship. This piece is lovely and deep. Your an inspiration Love n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 5:03:00 PM

    Carol; I like this poem, but it's sad. I know that we are here today and gone tomorrow. You are one of the few that has been reading my work since I started here, I just hope and pray that you are not leaving. Please stay. We need you here. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 6:49:00 AM

    While reading these sad but beautiful lines, one can only take a dive, deep into the world of hard truth that nothing is permanent in this Universe. A flower that blooms to-day shall no longer be spreading its fragrance forever. But Carol so long we can spread something to share with, we should not think negative. Keep spreading your smiles & fragrance on the horizons of Poetry Soup till God allows you to do so. We all wish you a long life. Great write Carol. Love& best wishes..Ravindra..C Brown

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 12:36:00 AM

    Thank you for this lesson of life. It's nice to stop and read inside your philosophical realm from time to time. I'll be back to taste more of your words. I love looove this poem! Specially how you concluded it, wrapping it in this almost... book...kinda! HEHE Anyways, Thanks for sharing this tender poem. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 3:22:00 PM

    I'm at the time where I'm seeing others step aside and wondering if I can fill their foot steps, if only slightly. And I see my time not too far off either. A well written poem. I hope you still have time remaining.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:34:00 AM

    True ,meaningful and adaptable thoughts .jk

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:19:00 PM

    that 's a lovely and heartfelt expressed poem, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:46:00 PM

    Ah! All you say is true...a sweet sadness, memories playing tic-tac-toe...win some, lose some! Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 4:42:00 PM

    time brings change ,to rearrange ,and life moves on so slowly...

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 4:03:00 PM

    Yes, that time comes to all..I am on the upper end of the totem pole so to speak..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the reading of my work and letting me know that you came by...Sara

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:12:00 PM

    lovely but sad poem, Carol, hope it is not you that is going, I like this

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 2:48:00 PM

    carol, this is one great poem. I am amazed by your talent reading through your poems. As you know I am new to the site and I am so glad I am here between all these great poets who i cannot find else where. thank you for your support.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 1:00:00 PM

    I am forever amazed with your poetry Carol, you write such beautiful things! I really enjoyed this incredible poem that I have read this afternoon! What wondrous lines you have written here my friend, I truly love this piece, Great Work!!

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