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I Have The Evil of You

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I Have The Evil of You

I have the evil of you
Caught in my hands, entangled
Like the arabesques of Eden's vines
Just like paradise, but why should shame remain
Singeing like immolation of Peter's Inferno
These reddish-purple chains convolute myself
as the grapples shoot out from the clouds
both below, above me
The self-lovelust propelling 
You did this - these plagues
You drag me down - to your cage
Cadaver Vampire - I am your slave


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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:35:00 PM
    Aphotic, congratulations with your awesome win in Delilah "Adultery , forgive or not to forgive" contest. Enjoyed stopping by to read all her winners:-) Always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Delilah's "Adultery" contest Aphotic. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:00:00 PM
    Congrats on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Intense and impressive write! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:07:00 AM
    greaat poetic diction and mood... cheers for a top spot which i share with you in warm delight!.:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:05:00 AM
    Wonder use of language fav line [Like the arabesques of Eden's vines] Nice to read you for the first time. congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:35:00 AM
    big congratulations on you grand win friend Aphotic. cheers!! :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 2:16:00 AM
    Warmest congratulations! Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:40:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your first place win xx

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:54:00 PM
    A powerful write! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:05:00 PM
    Well done ....Seren

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:24:00 PM
    Aphotic, wow,,, seems deep... Thank you for sharing, I truly enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Good Night~ Always & Forever PD"