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  1. Date: 10/18/2012 10:59:00 PM

    That's a very breathtaking and beautiful poem...my mom saw white feathers laying around (not usual for our area). I know this is different from your poem, but we like to think it is Joshua...Thanks for reading my poem "Memories of You." I'm so thankful people are reading it (374), it feels good to know a little piece of my son is out there...Peace to you also, Holly

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:13:00 PM

    I really like the content! I would check with Joyce or Andie about the meter, iambic is unstress STRESS..Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:20:00 PM

    Great imagery.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 10:06:00 AM

    A specific and well-painted scene, quite vividly imagined...personification, indeed.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 6:47:00 PM

    Nice fanciful write. A pleasure to read.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 5:53:00 PM

    Patricia this is soooo beautiful for Nette's contest. Definitely reads like a winner to me. Luv, Gail

    Ellis Avatar Patricia Ellis Date: 10/11/2012 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I didn't write this for a contest, but thank-you Gail !