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RHINESTONE LIGHT

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RHINESTONE LIGHT



the rising sun leans
on shoulders of mountaintops
beside a curved lake---
  roulette of bluebirds ascend
    burning tan from rhinestone light

in  late afternoon
trees shade dizzy,dizzy leaves
coiled from heated glint---
  petals gaily romp to play
    with rings of sunshine’s last twirls



Leonora Galinta's Tanka Crazy--Sunshine Contest
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 9:10:00 AM

    Love the personification of nature in this poem. It annimates the natural world in a scintillating manner! Congratulations on your conquest of the tanka!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:31:00 PM

    Nette..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:38:00 PM

    A roulette of birds, and dizzy leaves, you have a way with bringing things to life, congrats on your win Hope you are not too much affected by this storm, my prayers are with you all, love vie

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:53:00 PM

    what a great image. Love that line dizzy dizzy leaves. So nice to see this one now on the winners list. Congrats, Nette

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 1:10:00 PM

    So pretty, so perfect. Roulette. OH BRILLIANT. Will send soupie(s!!!) tonight. We're preparing for Sandy. 70-100km winds, rain AND SNOW?!? Awk! Over 70% of Ontarians are expected to lose electricity for an estimated 72 hours if the powerlines start to go. If you don't hear from me, it's cause I'm power-less. Pun? :) Love, Cyndi

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 12:38:00 PM

    Just beautiful Nette! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 10:57:00 AM

    CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A EXCITING WRITE AND WELL DESERVED WIN .. WISH WE HAD SOME RHINESTONE LIGHT TO CHASE 'SANDY' AWAY ..

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 10:50:00 AM

    Congrats! Just love your way with words Nette! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:54:00 AM

    Big congratulations nette xx

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:54:00 AM

    This is a beauty!! Congrats Nette...a lovely Tanka!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:00:00 AM

    A wild ride as awlays poetic animation! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:35:00 AM

    Congratulations Nette for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:59:00 AM

    Hi nette! "Rhinestone light"-- I really like that you captured sunshine in a different light here ;) I pass by here and there -- medyo na-busy eh...ikaw, kamusta? I hope all is well! hugs!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:34:00 AM

    :))))))

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:51:00 AM

    Refreshing imagery Nette, loved the read so much. Great Tanka penned dear, good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:19:00 AM

    Where???

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:12:00 AM

    Beautiful natrual scene here! Well crafted, too! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 1:32:00 PM

    Mesmerized by these delightful images I am,dear Nette:) Gems are flowing from your magic pen! Have a peaceful and blessed weekend ahead:) Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 10:17:00 AM

    SIMPLY ELEGANT NETTE LUV .. GRAND TITLE FOR CONTEST ACCENTED WITH DYNAMIC WORD FLOW .. WINNING WISHES TO U ..

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 8:54:00 AM

    Such rich in imagery...amazing!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:00:00 AM

    simply lovely and enchanting. A sure win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Nette, I love these, and again the images are perfect.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 1:25:00 PM

    A new treasure basis of your "treasure chest" - Thank you for sharing your treasures Nette. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 1:24:00 PM

    So this is the sun we speak of my dear, what a precious way to expose it, I have no doubt it touched you this morn, love and light, vie

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:59:00 PM

    ‡ Short Sweet And Enchanting. Tis Good To Behold One Of The Gifted As Beautiful Poetess' My Eyes Have Ever Beheld. And Yes I Do Find Much More Than Meets One's Open View Betwixt A Fairy Tales Lines. You Are So Gifted And Beautiful Nette. Lovely. Love, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:56:00 PM

    Wow, Nette, you amazed me yet again with this jewel of a write! I really enjoyed this harmonious and delightful poem my friend! What a wondrous piece, very descriptive as usual Nette, a natural wonder! Awesome write, Great Work!!